
"I pledge allegiance to the Flag of the United States of America, and to the Republic for which it stands, one Nation under God, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all."
- Pledging allegiance to a flag is idolatry, and "the Flag of the United States of America, and to the Republic for which it stands" can be reduced to "the United States of America"
- Pledging allegiance to a country promotes a blind, non-critical, allegiance, a "my country right or wrong" attitude
- "under god" does not meet the separation of church and state as defined in the constitution
- "one nation,... indivisible" begs the question, why cannot it be divided if desirable and democratically feasible?
- "liberty and justice for all" is not possible but an excellent thing to move towards
So that leaves, a new improved, version:
"We strive to promote liberty and justice for all"